How to Write an Epic College Admission Essay

Many factors come into play as college admissions teams evaluate each year’s pool of applicants. High school grades, extracurriculars and awards – they’re all major factors. But as more and more schools utilize a holistic admissions process, your admissions essay has more weight than ever.

Admissions committees have to comb through thousands of applications to choose an incoming class. Wondering how to accurately present yourself and make a lasting impression? Here are some savvy tips on creating a well-written, thoughtful and memorable essay that will make you stand out from the pack.

Answer the Question.

Read through the admissions guidelines for each college before putting pen to paper. What are the directions for the essay? Is there a prompt? Take some time to reflect on it and jot down your initial thoughts and responses. Then give yourself time to think about what you might be able to cover before you begin the essay.

Show, Don’t Tell.

While each applicant is different, everyone wants to touch on the same message: I’m a hard worker and I’m passionate about my pursuit of higher education. Take a tip from journalists and show the admissions team how you put your passion and industrious spirit into action – whether it’s in the classroom or during your club or sports activities. Tell them a story with plenty of memorable anecdotes that they’re not likely to forget.

Make Every Word Count.

After checking for a specific essay prompt, see if the application gives a word count – and stick to it. Tighten every sentence. Use active verbs and go easy on the lightweight adjectives and adverbs. You’re trying to convince the committee to admit you. Be sure to make a solid, persuasive argument.

Paint a Strong Picture of Yourself.

Instead of wasting valuable words rehashing the laundry list of activities and accolades they can find elsewhere in your application materials, pick one topic and explain why it’s a good example of your values, character and unique interests. Don’t tell them you’re on the debate team. Explain why collaborating with your classmates to craft a strong case gives you a thrill! Tell them about the a-ha moment in AP Chemistry that made you want to become an endocrinologist. Let them know what’s special about you.

Be Honest and Address the Elephant in the Room.

Did you change high schools and have to play catch-up in math during the second semester of sophomore year? Did your beloved grandparent pass away shortly before senior exams? Sometimes your grades reflect a personal trauma or challenge that can be addressed succinctly, but honestly, in your essay. This is your chance to let the admissions committee know about extenuating circumstances not covered in other areas of your application.

Tell Them You’ve Got What It Takes.

Another tactic that works? Show the committee that you are prepared and ready to transition to college. Explain how you’ve become resilient through a school opportunity or personal experience that required true grit and perseverance. Highlight character traits that demonstrate you are self-motivated and possess the confidence and organizational skills for advanced study, communal living and critical thought and analysis.

Get a Second – and Third and Fourth – Set of Eyes.

Don’t go it alone. Be sure to invite your parents, English teacher, guidance counselor and anyone else who will generously take the time to read your essay and offer constructive criticism. From suggesting a better phrase to offering an entirely different approach, a trusted reader can greatly improve your chances of saying what you mean in a way that will resonate with others.

Spellcheck!

We can’t say this enough: Your admissions essay is a formal piece of writing. Be sure to use proper tone and grammar. And spellcheck it each time you edit, making sure to read it through one last time to ensure changes have been saved and no editing marks remain on your clean, final copy.

Ready to Apply?

Talk to our team of undergraduate admissions counselors, each of whom is knowledgeable about Sacred Heart and the general college admissions process. Have a one-on-one conversation with one of our counselors to get all your questions answered either virtually or in person. Email visit@sacredheart.edu or call 203-371-7883.